
Dear Charlie,
First of all here is the link to our partners' school:
http://www.hillcresths.ocdsb.ca/
I'm sorry you could make it to the videochat with our Canadian partners.
Amina, Judith , Julia, Lisa, Nathan, Quentin, Salomé and Tiphaine did.
Thank you guys for taking the time to interact with our partners from school (Sorry I could not make the video work on my cell phone ;) or from home even though class was over.
The interaction on Edmodo was great. The students were definitely up to the challenges.
I was really impressed by their creative writing.
Below are the works selected by the students to represent the creative writing challenge:
The place I was in was packed with people. We could
not make any movement. Everybody was pushing each other to come quicker in this
special place. Everybody was rushing to give his ticket the fastest. I was
smothering. I gave my ticket as I was told to go on the left. I was trying to
walk to reach the place I was told. As I did, I took a deep breath closing my
eyes. Almost everybody had already given their ticket. The exaltation was
increasing. Every second seemed to be hours. We were all waiting. People were
shaking of excitement. Some men were trying to calm the crazy crowd, in vain.
That is when names started to be announced. Impatient, I watched them come
forward. Terribly tall, they were showing their tight faces with horrid
additions. It is with abhorrence that I was watching this freak show that was
progressing in front of my astonished eyes. Spotlights were on them for people
to only look at them. With their frozen faces, vivid and piercing eyes, they
were watching the audience that had gone insane. The audience was crazy of excitement.
People were shouting and yelling at these monsters some inaudible words. They
were wagging, stretching their arms in a disarticulated way, hoping to touch
the unattainable.
In my head, incomprehension was
growing. I was completely lost. How could it be possible, to make such
monsters? Horrified, I just ran away the further I could.
If frightened me, making me wonder how people could like watching that. I had stupidly
thought that pictures I had seen were fake, or that they were accentuating
these awful characteristics. In horror I had ran away from somewhere everybody
wanted to be…So that was it, the Red Carpet…
Who’s right?
I was so lost in many different ways.
I was somewhere and nowhere in the same time.
I was me and then I was nobody.
Every time I closed my eyes, I was gone and
suddenly I came back.
You probably think that I’m crazy, am I?
You’ll never know.
I was flying, I was invisible, I had power, I had
nothing and I had just my tears.
But what’s now? I was trying to fight but against
what? Against you? Love? Hate? People? Myself?
Why I’m still asking about stupid things when even
the simple questions are so complicated to answer.
You think I’m wrong? So can you tell why we are
here? In this strange world?
Is it true that you can love someone more than
yourself?
Tell me. Tell me the truth, tell me nothing or
everything.
People said it’s easy to love but harder to be
unloved.
I was there to love you, now you’re gone. Did you
love me back or not?
You may think that I was in love, that I’m writing
about my feelings. Are you sure?
Nothing is certain, life is unpredictable. Isn’t
it beautiful?
Complicated, this is how they called me.
Don’t believe what I say, what people say, we
always lie.
It’s rather die or live, am I right?
John was
not different from the rest of his kind: He had an average size (for a
mosquito), two wings, two eyes, six legs... His body was covered with
microscopic scales and he also had two long antennae which looked very feathery,
finally, he had a proboscis, the thing he used to feed himself... Pretty much
the definition of every mosquitoes. Furthermore, John did not carry any kind of
diseases, as a matter of fact, he almost never lived outside a house. Maybe
you've seen him in your living room, he was the kind of mosquitoes that are
active during daylight. John led his life as any other mosquitoes would have,
he used to travel from the kitchen to the bathroom, hoping to catch a drop of
water from a sink; or to fly around wherever he might had found light. But his
troubles came when he had to eat, because our little friend feeds upon blood;
and what was the main source of blood in the house? Yes, Humans. Sadly for him,
John had one day the bad idea to bite one... He was not thinking of doing evil,
he did that in order to survive, but it only led to his demise, as the Human
simply crushed john, giving him a painful death.
The Human did not feel any kind of remorse taking this innocent life; but why would he? After all, it was only a mosquito..
The Human did not feel any kind of remorse taking this innocent life; but why would he? After all, it was only a mosquito..
From where I stood
I still not understood
The memories of my childhood.
As I fall
They looked so tall
But they were not at all
So I had to have my own back
As they seem to come to attack
But all I do is not to react.
The images began to feel heavy
The sounds were noisy
And I all do is to remain guilty.
To escape from this painful moment, I look outside my flat
And near the window where I sat
I came to the conclusion that
From where I stood
I still not understood
The memories of my childhood.
I still not understood
The memories of my childhood.
As I fall
They looked so tall
But they were not at all
So I had to have my own back
As they seem to come to attack
But all I do is not to react.
The images began to feel heavy
The sounds were noisy
And I all do is to remain guilty.
To escape from this painful moment, I look outside my flat
And near the window where I sat
I came to the conclusion that
From where I stood
I still not understood
The memories of my childhood.
I scan the street in a glance. The streetlamps reveal the
loneliness of the street. The pavement still wet from the afternoon's rain, is
gleaming at their a yellowed light . I put on my respirator mask and my
headphones, turn up the volume and as the guitar starts singing, I uncap one of
my spray paint. The first spray colors
the bare wall, covering in bright red the dirt. As usual I feel my feet lift
off the ground. It is like being thunderstruck. The lightnings are guiding my
hand and I don't have to think too much about it, just to keep in mind the
final result I want. Of course it would be slightly different but that also
what I like. Drums are banging against my skull, I change color. My dark blue
highlights the stars. I do not hear the caracteristic « psssht » of
the spray because of the rythmic bass but I can feel it through my fingers, I
get tireless, fearless, limitless. I like to imagine how many people will pass
in front of my painting. I change once again of color for a pale orange. How many
of them will pass by without seeing it. I follow the lines drawn in my mind
with a matt grey. How many will feel something looking at it. I scatter light
blue drifts of paint. And how many wil forget it. I finalize with a large black
marker. How many ? I have lost the count. Now I may go. I do not sign. I
never sign. I like to think that they could have been done by anybody, that
they are not mine. I disappear in the night and I leave it behind me, for the
others.
Black Love
I saw the stars in your eyes
You were looking at me
with those two tiny universe
My hand touched yours as
we were eating
Then I carried you to the
nest of the little birds
You lied on me, your head
on my belly
As if you were trying to
catch the millions of butterflies
dancing in it
As I touched you, you
closed your eyes and began
purring.
I fell asleep, my fingers
running in your sweet
black hair
I woke up and you weren't
there
I searched for you for
what seemed eternity
and then stopped.
I accepted it all, your
dominant nature
your evasive hypocrisy
your
sadistic playfulness
your
wicked self
and your
complete disregard of my person.
You could probably come
home (if you ever even
considered the house your
home) in a few days
after staying n the red
lights of the sheets at night,
visiting other men.
Then I will wait for you,
my love, my woman, my CAT.
To finish, here are the recommendations (by both St Charles and Hillcrest students) for best film, best song and best artworks
BEST FILM:







Too bad I couldn't make it to the videochat with the Canadian students, it was during my internship period!
ReplyDeleteThe interaction was fun! So glad and so proud that my poem was chosen haha thank you to those who voted for it!