So as some of you know, we had a creative challenge on Edmodo, and my participation wasn't the most creative thing ever, as my creativity is currently functioning strangely - even more strangely than usually.
Anyways, I tried writing a lot of things before my final post, including this short poem that I did not put on Edmodo because it was too short, but I still wanted to share it :
Going up then going down
Going fast then going slow
Going in loops then going
straight
Almost toppling over
Almost breaking
But still there
Still fine
Still untouchable
They're like a
rollercoaster
They're my feelings.
Hope you liked it (or at least that you didn't hate it),
Judith
I found your poem really cute and I did like it ! It is great to see all the oib student's creativity with the challenges we do on edmodo and I think we should all post more creative work on this blog :)
ReplyDeleteDid you write other things for the creative challenge ?
ReplyDeleteNo, not really, this is the only idea that I managed to fully write down, the others kept on being wordless in my head ^^'
DeleteI really like your poem, simple but so deep in the same time. :)
ReplyDeleteI think your poem is really good, sometimes, the shorter the better.^^
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